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Forever Without You by ~silfo:iconsilfo:





my trial, my sins..
you are the witness,
the one that suffered
and who shall suffer more,
my vial, my kin..
you gave the statement
and realized where you entered,
where you shall suffer more...

the veridict was given
the dark past that was set
the things done you can never forget
the joy and faith were violently taken

and when I saw the rage, the anger inside
I found myself in your thoughtful truth
that was the moment I lost you
the moment you said goodbye
and left in the deep cold blue
with your sad passionate eyes

if I could only make you see
my inside struggle confuses me
it must be this day
this must be the way
i cannot touch you,
forever...
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Author's Comments

i've resubmited this piece after all these years after a request made by ~aekiy (P.S.: I didn't find the original image I used, i'm sorry :()

It was made as fan poetry for a comic book that I absolutely loved at the time: Uncanny X-men #350. If you have read it then you will probably understand the context of the poem better (or you just have to be a Gambit and Rogue Fan).

curious fact: This poem was a daily deviation back in the day.

i hope you enjoy it :)

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:iconaekiy:
Thank you so much for posting this back up! And the image was lovely, but it wasn't the most important part. I'm glad I can +fav this again.. and I hope you understand that I'll be saving a copy to my computer just for my own purposes (in case it goes away again someday). Thanks so much again. I do so love this poem.

--
...where universal forces vie,
and myriads of treasures lie
:iconsilfo:
thank you :D
I don't think it will disappear again. If I have time I will post more stuff and keep this account alive.
:iconaekiy:
Cool. (^*^) It will be good to see more of your stuff again.

--
...where universal forces vie,
and myriads of treasures lie

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